Engaging Critique Group Activities

By CaraMarie Christy

Critique group work need not be limited to reading and editing writer submissions. Writers can practice their skills in a variety of ways, from writing exercises to even some games off paper. Here is a list of some well-loved writing and creative exercises that can be done during workshops:

Frame the idea of “scene”- Few novice writers understand where and when a scene, a.k.a. a piece of the written work that forwards the overall plot, begins and ends. This becomes a problem when writers don’t understand what their scene accomplishes in the overall structure of their piece. Writers should ask themselves: what does this scene achieve? The most effective scenes are mini narratives with a beginning, in which an idea is introduced, a middle, where the character faces conflict on the idea, and something learned about the idea that constitutes the end of the scene. Have writers take four colored markers and a copy of their favorite novel. For one of the colors, trace out the scene as a whole, then use the remaining colors to mark where the beginning, middle, and end are located. This game gives the writer an idea of how the pacing in scenes feels.

Write in the Opposite Perspective- Written pieces with many characters can run into the problem of limited understanding of motivation. For example, writing villains is often difficult, because many writers establish villains as evil for the sake of being evil, rather than understanding their ulterior point of view. To keep villains from sounding like soulless masses of darkness, have writers practice writing in the villain’s perspective.

Act it Out- A lot of the principles that apply to acting also apply to writing. Both require understanding motivation and tone of voice. In this famous activity, a writer gets to play director and casts fellow critics as characters in their piece. Critics should be given time to read and understand their part before attempting to act out the scene. There are two problems with this activity: the first being that not every writer is a good actor, and the second that some parts might be misread as dry and dull if the acting is bad. This game also takes a good deal of time, especially if done for every writer in a group. However, the activity does give writers some idea of how their characters look and sound to readers.

Improvisation- A writer has to understand setting, characters, and relationship set-ups in order to create a believable story. Improvisational games are great ways to get into the mindset of building different characters. One game in particular, called “three lines,” is useful for understanding how to set up a story efficiently. Three lines forces players—in three lines of dialogue or less—to establish relationships, characters, and settings. For example: “Miss, I’ll need to see some identification before you take that pterodactyl bone.” From this line we understand setting, the fact that this takes place in a museum with pterodactyl bones, that the characters in play are an officer and possible thief, and that these two are strangers as can be seen in the officer’s use of “miss.” More games that develop characters, like “freeze” and “head in a bucket,” as well as instructions, can be found at improvencyclopedia.org.

The Object Game- The internet is home to thousands of images. Googling the word “apple” gets you apples of any sort: red, green, blue, and even rainbow. In this game, have a facilitator look up a common object, and find the strangest image of that object that they can. The facilitator presents this image, such as a rainbow apple, to the group.. The group then has a set time to race and come up with as many words to describe the strange object as possible. This game is meant to break the habit writers fall into of using the same words in their descriptions. Facilitators should be sure to keep safe search on!

Line by Line- An old classic, the line by line game is one where writers collaborate to build a story, passing a sheet around a circle to see what the next writer in the group will add. This game is ancient, but still a favorite with writers looking to keep their writing fresh. The only downside to this game is that it tends to be over quickly and, depending on who is playing, the outcome can take some silly and unexpected turns.

Crit Group Management Techniques

By CaraMarie Christy

Every writing group should function differently based on its structure and goals, which can be anything from providing a professional setting for established authors workshopping their ideas to helping novice writers improve their craft. No writer attends a crit group to face pandemonium or demoralization, but many crit group experiences are wholly or partially dissatisfying. Although there is no set of universal guidelines that will provide solutions to every problem writers face in a workshop or state how exactly a critique group should be run, there are a few key procedures that will help bring order to chaos :

Appointing Leaders- Managing a critique group requires a writer willing to play “manager.” A group without a designated leader can find trouble in resolving conflict. It is rarely productive to consider everyone in the group as a “leader.” As the old saying goes, “Being leader-full is essentially being leader-less.” A leader of a critique group can also have a number of duties other than presiding over a meeting. These can be anything from figuring out when and where the group is going to meet next, to facilitating votes for deciding group objectives, and to filtering submissions from people looking to join the critique group.

For writers joining a critique group, they can discover that leaders have already been established. But writers that create new critique groups might consider founding members as candidates for leadership. In forming a new critique group, a leader should be selected based on availability and group consensus. A leader that is not available during most meeting times and cannot be present as an authority figure, despite any prowess they might possess in writing, will most likely hinder a group’s productivity.

Deadlines- Critique time should be spent equally on all members. That could mean giving each writer a specific day for receiving feedback or reserving time spots for each writer’s output to be workshopped. Writers should be prepared to either email or hand in hard copies of their work on days that they are assigned. Having a minimum and maximum word count on pieces to be critiqued can increase the group’s ability to keep within time constraints, without the risk of apportioning a writer too little or too much attention.

A Standard Time for Critiquing- Some pieces need more critiquing than others, but face the hazard of favoring or disfavoring members if they spend more time critiquing one writer than they do others. Having a timer on hand can keep members faithful to time constraints agreed upon by the group. A large piece of work could require more time than the critique group might have and a smaller one might barely take up any critique time at all. Below are rough estimates of word counts for a group to consider when deciding how long their meetings should be:
5000+ words = around 25 minutes
10000+ words = around 45 minutes
20000+ words = 1 hour to 1 hour and 15 minutes
50000+ words = around 1 1/2 to 2 hours

It is important to encourage equal use of this time by giving everyone a chance to share their notes. To promote this policy, members can implement a “no person speaks twice in a row” policy or engage those who are shy to participate by asking for their opinion regularly.

Breaks to “Cool Down”- There are times when critics might not agree on what is best for a piece. One person might like the piece in present tense and another in past tense. Studies show that both past and present tense have pros and cons, and that neither can be quantifiably identified as the “better” tense. In this example then, it is not an issue of who is right and who is wrong, but a matter of clashing ideologies.

Debate is healthy for a workshop, as it gives a writer a good sense of different readers’ expectations, but it is only productive if the writer’s final choice is respected. Conflicting advice is up to the writer to deal with; it is not up to the group members to hold lengthy debates until a “winner” is chosen. To avoid deliberations escalating into competition, a group should take short breaks when discussions become too heated, perhaps move on to a different piece for a moment or grab a snack in order to regroup their thoughts.

Percentage of Attendance- One last suggestion to manage a critique group is to hold writers accountable for attending, and participating in, a certain number of meetings. This ensures that writers are actively engaged in the group and that the group does not wither away. Writers can claim to be part of a critique group, and then never show up, for various reasons: they only want the group to look good on a resume; other obligations are preventing them from being able to participate; or they are unable to keep up with the amount of work that the group requires. In these cases, a leader should give the writer who is not fully participating a warning, and ask them to leave the group if attendance continues to be poor. Required attendance is by no means a punishment, but rather an incentive for writers to do what they joined the group to do– write!

Choosing your Ideal Critique Group Environment

By CaraMarie Christy

Location is key to the efficiency of a critique group because it will set the mood, the pace at which the group functions, and the rate at which its participants develop their skills. Just as a grim setting on the written page can induce a sense of nervousness in a reader, a positive work environment can create a feeling of productivity and energy for crit group partners. There are few places where a critique group could not meet, given new advances in online conference calls, like Skype. For those critics who wish to meet in-person, some potential work spaces offer more benefits than others. Here are some advantages and disadvantages of common meet-up locations:

Coffee Shops/Bookstores- “I believe humans get a lot done, not because we’re smart, but because we have thumbs so we can make coffee.” – Flash Rosenberg. These are some the best places to set up workshops, as they are often designed to promote “comfort”—e.g. big comfy chairs, tables, and internet access. The issues with this sort of location are lack of crowd control and the occasional need to get permission from store owners to use the facilities. Starbucks is famous for allowing people to use their facilities as work spaces for free but, because of this, there are hours in which the stores become overcrowded with business. Too many people trying to work at once creates a chaotic environment. To prevent this, writers need to schedule around store “rush” hours and plan alternative locations if the primary becomes impractical.

Library- “A library is the delivery room for the birth of ideas, a place where history comes to life.”- Norman Cousins. There is something to be said for writing literature in a sea of novels and novellas, as though creativity can be obtained through osmosis. Libraries are usually free to use and include numerous spaces with chairs and tables to hold meetings. However, in the middle of that sea, are other readers and writers trying to work, which can lead to whispered meetings or noise complaints. Often, libraries have rooms that can be reserved for community use, where critics can be free to be talk without disturbing other workers. Using these can require contacting library administration, who will clear up the regulations and terms of use of these facilities. Critics interested in using a library’s conference room should be prepared to justify their group’s validity and reasons for meeting. Some libraries allow only non-profit organizations to use their meeting rooms.

Playground/Park/Outdoors- “Nothing coaxes jumbled thoughts into coherent sentences like sitting under a shade tree on a pleasant day.” – Carol Kaufman, NY Times. Some writers benefit from fresh air. It can be relaxing and studies show that sun exposure helps establish a strong sleep cycle, increase Vitamin D absorption, and can cause stress relief and relaxation, all of which can lead to more energy to put towards writing and editing. There is also easy access to outdoor facilities. However, fighting the urge to lie out in the sun can be counter-productive to writing group goals. If the group is one for casual chat and critique, then this would serve its purposes. But a serious push for studying requires sitting up, paying attention, and having all participants actively engaged in discussion. There is also a problem for critique groups, in that if any one of their members has allergies, staying outside for an extended period of time becomes a challenge.

Home- “You will never feel truly satisfied by work until you are satisfied by life.” –Heather Schuck – This is a location with easy access and atmosphere control, having a critique group member volunteer their own home means that no one has to ask anyone in administration, like the coffee shops and libraries, for permission and there is no fear of disturbing other workers. The downside of using this environment is the distinction between a “work zone” and a “relaxation zone.” It’s important to have a work-life balance. Productivity increases with routine, at home routines can involve watching television and eating meals, instead of working on written content.

Diner/Restaurant/Bar- “First we eat, then we do everything else.” – M.F.K. Fisher. A favorite environment with many writers is a local diner, restaurant, or bar. These places offer the availability of substantial food and refreshment, unlike coffee shops which only provide sugary foods and drinks. Often times, if staff are tipped well and managers don’t mind, critique groups can meet here without having to confer with anyone beforehand. Typically, diners and bars are well-crowded and conversation is a norm, so there is no fear of interrupting another patron trying to work. The downsides of these environments are if the diner not selected well, the meals they provide can be expensive and that plates of food can often leave little room for writing samples and workshop notes. The work usually has to begin after the table is cleared.

All-Time Top 7 Time Travelers in Literature

By Tiffany Foster

Mankind has always been fascinated by the concept of time. It’s how we know our meeting is running too long or when our popcorn is done. Time travel has hooked us into books, television shows, and movies for as long as each medium has existed.

If we didn’t love time travel so much, Doctor Who would’ve been canceled decades ago. Well, it was. . . but they brought it back!

For centuries, our literature has questioned how time effects humanity, and how we would be affected if we could manipulate time.  Readers obsession with time travel has strong foundations in classic and modern literature, and here are some of our favorite travelers in time.

 

Hermione Granger from Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban by J.K. Rowling

 

In the biggest nerd move in history, Hermione becomes a time traveler in order to make it to all of her classes. However, when faced with the execution of an innocent man, Hermione and Harry break every rule about time travel in order to save Sirius Black. Hermione, entirely anxious about paradoxes, manages to save the day with her knowledge of the future and avoids any irreconcilable paradoxes, once again proving her absolute brilliance. #brightestwitchofherage

What is amazing about Hermione as a time traveler is her knowledge and strategic manipulation of time. Most time travelers find themselves in another time by accident and have next to no control over where they are and what happens to them. Hermione respects the power of time travel, and she manipulates it with extreme care. She could’ve used the Time-Turner to win bets, cheat on her exams, or at least do this one more time. . .

. . . But noble Hermione’s only abuse of time travel is to save someone she doesn’t even really know.

 

Billy Pilgrim from Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut

Vonnegut’s character Billy Pilgrim is a leaf on the breeze as he bounces from time to time with absolutely no control. Billy hops from his time serving in WWII to his abduction by extraterrestrials.

 

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The alien Tralfamadorians, who see all of time existing simultaneously, and Billy begins to see time similarly. Also, the Tralfamadorians look like this:

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Yes, it’s a toilet plunger with a hand and an eye.

What makes Billy Pilgrim a unique time traveler is his complete lack of control. Often times in science fiction, time travel is a way to try to control what no one should. Billy in no way affects or changes time, and he holds no authority over time. Instead, Billy believes there is almost no use in trying to control time at all. So it goes. However, Vonnegut suggests Billy’s apathy is wrong by making us uncomfortable with Billy’s acceptance of the inevitable.

 

Hank Morgan from A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Court by Mark Twain

Thrown into King Arthur’s Court, Hank is the epitome of know-it-all American mentality. During his time in the past, he proceeds to completely revolutionize and simultaneously destroy King Arthur’s Court. Hank’s transformation of the Middle Ages begins with his introduction of technology that he uses to convince everyone he is a wizard – which doesn’t fly with Merlin because he doesn’t like Hank moving in on his turf. Ultimately, this pissing contest climaxes in a Tarantino-style bloodbath. Yeah, you’re right – that didn’t happen in the Bing Crosby movie.

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Mark Twain is still turning is his grave over this one.

Hank’s my-way-or-the-highway approach to time travel is emphasized in more modern (and silly) interpretations of Connecticut Yankee in films like Army of Darkness and A Kid in King Arthur’s Court.


Similar to Eckels from “Sound of Thunder” (who’s later on our list), Hank is arrogant in his manipulation of time and hardly considers the consequences of his actions. Ultimately, both characters destroy society.

 

Dana Franklin from Kindred by Octavia Butler

Dana is different from our other time travelers because she travels within the timeline of her ancestors. Living in the 1970’s, she is suddenly taken back to the 1800’s where she encounters her slave and slave-owner ancestors. She is pulled back and forth between times, and she even manages to bring her husband with her. She becomes a great influence in her ancestor Rufus’s life by repeatedly saving his life, despite the fact that he is a slave-owner and a rapist.

Which probably felt a lot like this.

Dana is an amazing time traveler because she has a strong and meaningful influence on her ancestors and ultimately her own future. Although she is pulled back into the past unwillingly, she finds a purpose there and does her best to maintain her ancestry.

Eckels from “Sound of Thunder” by Ray Bradbury

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Of course Simpsons did it.

Eckels is very similar to Hank Morgan and is the exact opposite of Hermione and Dana. Eckels pays ten grand to go back in time to shoot a Tyrannosaurus Rex in a Walter Palmer approach to feeling like a winner. However, Eckels chickens out almost immediately, and despite strict rules requiring trophy hunters to stay on the path, Eckels spastically tramples a butterfly as he tears off the path like a baby.This causes the entire future to take a different path in an extremely literal butterfly effect. Don’t worry. Like most things, it’s better than the Ashton Kutcher movie.Butterflyeffect_poster

Eckels is an awesome time traveler because he represents the arrogance of time travel. Despite being a skilled hunter in his own time, he wishes to destroy the earth’s most terrifying creature in an act of showmanship. When confronted with the terror that is an actual T-Rex, he recognizes his hubris and promptly wigs out.

Every action Eckels makes is entirely selfish and self-motivated. In the end, Bradbury shows us where being an egotist gets you – a world that looks suspiciously like Biff’s in Back to the Future II.

Wade Linwood from Wade of Aquitaine by Ben Parris

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Wade is a time traveler who suddenly finds himself in the early Middle Ages, once known as the Dark Ages. Similar to Burroughs’s John Carter, Wade travels across the astral plane; however, instead of using a mystery cave with magical gases, Wade is thrown across time as a combined effect of an acupuncture treatment and his synesthesia (crossed senses). Wade’s synesthesia is one of the strongest and most complex in existence, and his connection to another complex synesthete, Kreindia, draws him to her.

 

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The novel as a whole manages to mesh fantasy, hard science, and factual history to create an interesting one-of-a-kind time travel series. Additionally, Wade makes for an even more interesting time traveler because his crossed senses create bizarre but engaging connections and skills. Also, he truly attempts to adjust to the time period instead of ruling it with his knowledge of the future. This sets him apart from the Connecticut Yankee’s Hank Morgan. More like Kindred’s Dana Franklin, Wade finds himself helping to preserve the most critical features of the past instead of trying to rewrite it.

The Time Traveler from The Time Machine by H.G. Wells

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Considering the protagonist’s name is literally “The Time Traveler” and the novel coined the term “time machine,” this one pretty much had to be on the list. Our Time Traveler (who many people know as “George” from the 1960 movie version classic) finds a way to travel into the future using his time machine. Once there, what he discovers is disturbing: A reciprocal society where one group, the Eloi, appear to be in charge of the Morlocks, a class of people who live below ground, but the reality is the Eloi are in fact the Morlocks’ food source.

Despite the Traveler’s time machine being less epic than this time machine –
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– the Time Traveler is one of the few travelers we see visit the future. Billy Pilgrim only visits the future once in the entirety of Slaughterhouse Five, which makes the Time Traveler our only real future traveler. He goes beyond anything he knows, understands, or has experienced. Future time travel is terrifying, and the Time Traveler faces it head on – making him the ballsiest of our time travelers.

Crit Etiquette: Forming a Critique Group that Suits your Objective

By CaraMarie Christy

The difference between a book group and a critique group is that the former is created to study literature, usually without any of the authors present, and the latter is to share work-in-progress with other writers for the mutual benefit of each participant. Those who choose to form critique groups can desire different outcomes from the effort that they invest. Productivity is subjective and depends on the end goal of the individuals who initially decide to form the new critique group. An end goal can be anything from improving grammatical skill to discovering new story ideas, or simply obtaining a better understanding of readers. Forming a group is most fulfilling when the group’s activities match most of the participants’ end goals. The focuses of the critique groups below can be mixed and matched to create critique groups that will fit various writer needs.

Skill Building– “Am I doing this right?”- This is the best way to start off a critique group for new writers. The idea behind this type of group is to focus on construction rather than content. Many writers, even professionals, make mistakes in formatting dialogue, common grammar, and switching tenses mid-story. However, if these skills are drilled often enough, writers can see a significant improvement until formatting and grammar become second nature. A great way to get this type of critique, without having to dedicate copious amounts of workshop time toward it, is to produce hard copies or email copies of work to other group members. By making use of the Track Changes function of Microsoft, which can be found under the Review tab, writers can make comments on pieces they have received and then return them to the owner without altering the original work. Through this, group members can work on the grammar and formatting of their piece on their own time and reserve critique time for a different focus.

Concept Forming- “J.R. Tolkien and C.S. Lewis walk into a bar.”- This form of group is less about how the words are written, and more about the overall picture that the words form. To approach this style of group requires some form of mutual respect in its participants, because favorable concepts are going to vary based on a writer’s opinion. A famous partnership, and example of this, was that of J.R. Tolkien and C.S. Lewis, who used to throw around ideas with each other over drinks. Once J.R. Tolkien stated that no novel would ever be successful if it were to include a lamppost, which gave C.S. Lewis his famous idea for using a lamppost as the iconic image for his magical world in The Chronicles of Narnia.

Social Interaction- “Writers choose a lonely life.” Some writers are only out to touch base with other writers, read manuscripts, and receive/give encouraging comments. These kinds of groups give writers affirmation of their skills that they cannot provide for themselves. The problem with this sort of critique group is the heavy possibility for a lack of commitment. If meetings are only casual, members will not feel a strong need to prepare or show up to the meetings. To prevent this, a group can build into their workshop fun exercises (for example http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/7-creative-writing-prompts-to-spark-your-writing) which will help writers stimulate their creative senses and give them a reason to look forward to the workshop.

Mock Readership- “Would you buy this?”- This is a group to choose if the profitability of the work is the primary objective. This is the hardest type of critique group to form, as it requires a great deal of planning to form a group who will be subjective, with no personal bias to distract from the analysis and whether they would rate the piece favorably. For example, a friend might rate a piece of work at a higher value than a non-acquaintance. This type of group is also only productive if everyone in the group fits the “target audience” for the types of work that are being presented. If someone who writes mystery novels presents their work to a romance reader it might not receive the type of feedback that they are looking for. Few critique workshops are meant to be styled like this.

Crit Etiquette: What is Fair Game and What is Not

by CaraMarie Christy

There is no set of concrete rules for how to approach critique etiquette, or critiquette, as it’s been called. However, those who participate in a workshop/critique group should hold themselves to a standard of professionalism that encourages the productivity and continuity of the group. It’s difficult to know what these ideals are, what is considered acceptable and what is not, especially when most comments made in critique groups and workshops are, assumedly, an effort toward producing good literature and not an opportunity to vent. Here are some common critiques broken down into instances in which they might be acceptable and other times when they might be taken as counterproductive:

Character/Story/ Style Critique- “I don’t like what your character did.” These are the hardest critiques to give and receive, because they can often come across as unduly subjective and unhelpful. Characters in fiction cannot be censured for their misbehavior. However, there are some times when such comments are extremely beneficial to writers, though they should be more carefully crafted than the example given above. If a critic has a strong sense of who the character is, what they are likely to do, and can justify that “what the character did” is not in line with how the character has previously acted, then this critique is valid. A way to rephrase this opinion in line with useful critiquette would be to say, “I’m having trouble believing that your character would do this because of [insert reasoning here].” There are rare times when this critique is acceptable because of the character’s immorality. Numerous popular stories about serial killers fly off the shelves. If the character’s offense is so grotesque that it could be seen as a threat to readership (it makes readers stop reading) then it might be suitable to ask the writer to consider having the offense done “off screen” or, in other words, not in the view of the reader.

Format Critique- “Your story is too short/ long.” This is a critique that can work well, given that it has proper backing and the critique is also given with an identification of where the writer could shorten/lengthen the story. What a critic often means by this is that the pacing feels wrong. If a story is too short, then some of the scenes need to be fleshed out more, or there needs to be more background information. Focusing on description rather than action can also lengthen the feel of a scene. If a story is too long, then perhaps certain scenes need to be cut, focusing on those that would not impact the story’s arc. A solution for this problem is to take a favorite book, highlighting slow portions of the text with one color and the fast with another, to get a sense of how these even out in a story.

Factual Critique- “What happened in your story is impossible due to… (the laws of physics, human behavior, my experience, etc).” There are three versions of the factual critique to look out for: those that have been researched, hearsay, and overgeneralizations. Two of these are not professional and should be avoided during workshops: overgeneralization and hearsay. Overgeneralizations are not facts. An example of an overgeneralization is, “You can’t make the dog the hero in this story, because one time a dog bit me, so therefore all dogs are evil.” Hearsay is when a critic points out a flaw based on assumptions they’ve heard, but has not bothered to make sure that their critique is a fact. It allows for reasonable doubt about that comment’s accuracy. A well-researched and established fact is the most productive input.

Specific Detail Critique- “I don’t like when I can’t pronounce the character’s name. If you ever want anyone to read your work ever, you should change it!” –. The above statement, which is common in critique groups, is simply not true. A lot of great books have characters with difficult names, most notably “Hermione” in J.K. Rowling’s famous Harry Potter series. In her fourth book, after massive amounts of fans requested the pronunciation, Rowling cleared up the confusion by having one of her characters sound out the name phonetically. Few would argue though, that no one read the Harry Potter books until after book four. The best way to approach a specific detail critique is to look at the work as a whole. Does changing this detail cause any change to the theme as a whole? Does it help improve on the theme or verisimilitude of the piece? If not, then the detail might be inconsequential and a matter best left to the writer’s personal choice.

Interview with Ben Parris by Kirsten Kim

To start off can you tell us a little bit about yourself and your background?

I come from a land of successful people. It’s known as Brooklyn. I was one of the country’s top federal investigators, a forensic accountant, which can be described as a CSI for auditing: you find a pile of documents and determine whether they match the real world. In the process, you follow leads and interview people to separate guilty from innocent, and you try not to get hurt.

 

What inspired you to write Creds? How much is based on your own experiences with the IRS?

I began to write Creds as a journal on the day of my interview for the IRS. It was so evocative that I didn’t want to forget any of the details or the phrases that came to mind as events unfolded. When you’re a writer, you just start writing. But of course when I changed it into a novel I had to disguise everyone involved. For the sake of storytelling, multiple people are sometimes combined into one person. You have to shake out the complexities or no one can follow it. If you want to know which of the stories happened to me personally, that’s classified. I can tell you that more of it is true than anyone will believe, and that one of my audit subjects did try to kill me in the manner I described in the book.

 

Much of the book is critical of the bureaucracy that exists in the IRS, does that reflect your own opinions?

I actually see it in a more holistic way. As big as the IRS is, it’s part of a much larger process. You can’t even analyze the federal government unless you realize how big business drives it. What you have in the Treasury Department is a handful of heroes who overcome the handful of rogues and the multitude of nine-to-fivers to keep the machine marginally running for 325 million people who hope they don’t ever have to meet someone at the IRS. And every year you have thousands of stories of justice and injustice.

 

You released Creds in four separate parts, what was the reasoning behind that and does the complete edition differ in any way?

The four separate parts was a structure I chose mainly to keep the excitement level high. Each one has either a cliff hanger or a significant amount of dynamic tension. It’s my method of taking the story of a life—which is continuous—and making it episodic as they do in television because otherwise the multiple-year span with key events scattered throughout is a challenge in novel form. Since this was an Amazon serial release and part of a long roll-out, it was also a way to test whether the adaptation from pure memoir to what I would call a “memoir novel” was working.

 

When did you know that you wanted to be a writer?

If we ask when did someone become committed to an idea and the dedication it requires, that’s a gradual process. If we ask, however, where was the first key moment that you can identify on the path, then I would say that it was when my elementary school teachers first began to tell me that my book reports are unique, that my analysis of the stories were refreshing perspectives, far from anything they had seen before. By sixth grade, I had won a statewide essay contest in competition with high school students, and the last peg was when I got to high school and my fellow students paid me to write stories. By most definitions, you become a professional when people step up to pay you for what you do.

 

Do you have a process as a writer?

For me, a nexus of ideas creates a starting point. If those thoughts spark a key scene in my mind, that’s something I want to write down and test out, first to see if I have actual plot elements, which is what makes an idea a story, and further down the road, to see if it contains sufficient scope to be a novel.

 

What are you reading right now and what genres are you drawn to?

I’m reading The English Spy by Daniel Silva. So by genre, I can easily say spy novels, and broadly speaking, I can also add science fiction. I can rarely say mystery. After Agatha Christie’s Ten Little Indians, everything else lies in its shadow. Mystery is often a fun read, not a masterpiece. Crossovers that are part-mystery are a different story because they can be very challenging to create.

 

What advice would you give to aspiring writers?

Momentum. There are fantastic writers out there, who I know personally, that establish a pattern early in life that denies them an enriching writing life. (And I’m not talking about money at all, but rather the value of writing from the perspective of the writer.) Coming up short arises from the pattern of thinking that baby steps don’t count. Another aspect of the problem is knowing that you have a talent, and being satisfied with that knowledge instead of finding out how much further you can go. It’s the one-day-I’ll-go-on-a-diet mentality. Aspiring writers of all ages need to allow themselves progress by any increment they can muster and let it develop into a pattern of constant writing.

A Healthy Dose of Darkness: The Appeal of Mystery in Fiction

by Maggie Auffarth

 

For fiction lovers, there’s no end to the kinds adventures we can have. Want to spend the next few hours on pirate ship with Blackbeard? How about trying to escape a government lab with a top-secret serum in your pocket? No problem! Reading makes it possible for us to take on these lives and more. And for many of us, there is no life we enjoy better than that of a detective on the hunt for a new case.

Since their genesis in 1860 with Wilkie Collins’ novel, The Woman in White, mystery novels have continued to amass success on the popular market. Today their genre enjoys their fair share of cultural saturation—from the still-undefeated bestselling records garnered by crime queen Agatha Christie, to the wild success of mystery TV shows like Castle, Sherlock, or NCIS.

So, what makes a mystery story great? What is it about this genre that draws readers in and keeps us obsessively turning pages at three in the morning? Here are a few aspects of the mystery field that make its best offerings thoroughly captivating:

1.) A Reason to Keep Reading

The first job of a writer is to try and hook their readers by giving them a reason to continue on to the next page—but mystery novels already come with built-in incentive. From the moment a reader cracks open the spine of a mystery, we know exactly what we want from it and exactly how much investment we’re willing to put in to get there. Even in the slower moments of the mystery, the underlying puzzle will always keep us turning pages and give us something to speculate about.

2.) Compelling Characters

One of the best things mystery novels promise are a list of fascinating and possibly untrustworthy suspects. In the hands of a good writer, these characters can consume readers for hours at a time. Whether we’re debating the dependability of Vera Claythorne’s story in Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None, or trying to decide our feelings towards Michael Tolland in Dan Brown’s Deception Point, a good mystery tests a reader’s intuition as well as our problem solving skills.

3.) The Promise of Resolution

The final thing that a good mystery novel gives its readers is a satisfying ending. This doesn’t necessarily mean that all plot threads are tied up in a neat bow, or that all the characters receive a happy ending. Instead, it means that the mysterious perpetrator is revealed, along with the methods he used to commit his crimes. It also means that there were enough clues laid out beforehand that the readers could’ve pieced together the solution in the same way the detective does.

Few stories capture our deepest fears or draw us in like mystery novels. They tap into our desire for excitement and grant us a healthy dose of darkness. They thrill, shock, and challenge us while simultaneously improving our attention to detail. In short, mysteries make us better…as long as we keep them confined within the pages of our library books, that is.

Wayward Pines Review Season 1 Episode 3: Our Town, Our Law

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By Katherine Everett

Wayward Pines is a television series about Ethan Burke, a special agent who finds himself trapped in the small Idaho town called Wayward Pines, and discovers that there are far more disturbing things going on behind the peaceful, quiet windows and doors than he could ever have imagined. In our continuing coverage, we look at what’s great and what’s odd in each episode.

After this episode, I feel like the townspeople of Wayward Pines are going to be playing a very unpleasant game of “Who Shot the Sheriff?” It is pretty daring to kill off so many main characters this early in the season, but it definitely makes for great television. Sheriff Pope shared Beverly’s fate when he was killed by Ethan Burke at the end of this episode. There was also the added drama of Ethan’s wife and son joining him in Wayward Pines, which will definitely shake things up a bit. While I have some complaints about the legitimacy of their actions when they arrive in town, I will say that they made everything a lot more interesting for episode 3, “Our Town, Our Law.”

Hay-Makers:

“Our Town, Our Law.” More like the Sheriff’s town and the Sheriff’s law. This episode did a great job of amping up the tension even more on top of Beverly’s untimely death at the end of the last episode. Ethan Burke makes another daring escape attempt, his wife and son show up out of the blue, and Sheriff Pope finally loses his cool and is ready to kill. In fact, I’m surprised but thrilled by how quickly the plot seems to be advancing. I didn’t expect Ethan’s wife and son to make it to Wayward Pines until at least halfway through the season, and certainly didn’t expect to see the death of Sheriff Pope this early. Wayward Pines is wasting no time getting to the action and drama, which is fine with me. And just when you thought they weren’t going to throw anything more at you, they reveal there is some terrifying creature on the other side of the enormous fence running around the town. Let’s just say I’m beginning to understand why there are such strict rules governing the townspeople. It might be to keep them safe from whatever is out there. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Head-Scratchers:

To start with the bad, I regret to say there are still some issues with characters behaving unrealistically in this episode. Theresa, Ethan Burke’s wife, seriously bugged me from the beginning. When she gets into town after having a car accident and finally reunites with her husband, she doesn’t question why he has a freaking house in town, why he’s been missing for days, if he’s having an affair, and why she and her son have to stay in the house. I mean, really? Nothing? It’s clear there’s something fishy going on, especially when the sheriff shows up unannounced to steal her ice cream and threaten her family. I thought that even after hearing that her husband might be having an affair, that she would at least stick around long enough to give him a piece of her mind! And as for Ethan, why wouldn’t he explain things immediately to her and her son? It just doesn’t make any sense. I’m worried that the show is so focused on the fast-paced plot that they’ve forgotten how normal people react in certain situations. Fingers crossed this doesn’t become a constant issue in an otherwise amazing TV show.

As for the wackiness in this episode, there’s definitely a lot to discuss. I really want to know how Sheriff Pope hasn’t overdosed on ice cream yet. Just kidding. Although he does seem to have an unhealthy obsession with it. The really interesting thing about him is that, while he clearly follows orders from whoever is on the phone, he’s not happy about it. This episode showed that the sheriff has some real issues with the way things are being run and would much rather have everyone believe that he is in charge of the town. So, what kind of relationship does he really have with the higher-ups? Is he really in league with them or is he just as imprisoned as the rest of the townspeople? I guess it’ll be hard to find out, seeing as he’s dead and all. Something else to ponder is why whoever is in charge is keeping Ethan alive at this point. He’s clearly important, but why? You’d think he would have caused enough trouble to merit being killed at this point, so there has to be a reason why they’re keeping him around. Also, it looks like Kate didn’t betray him at the end of the last episode after all, and Sheriff Pope just said that she did. Is she lying or telling the truth? Finally, the biggest question of all: What was that creature that took Pope’s body at the end of the episode? Is it a monster? Some government scientist’s creation gone horribly wrong? An alien, perhaps? We’ll just have to wait to find out.

 

Why Historical Fiction?

By Sarah Tarabey

 

Reading historical fiction is, in many ways, like reading action and adventure novels, sci-fi thrillers, or romance series: we read them to take us just far away enough from where we are that we can explore what we know in ways we haven’t yet encountered. But historical fiction also provides us with experiences that other genres cannot.

While actual texts from the past are rich and alive, they can also prove difficult to parse. Have you picked up a copy of Chaucer’s Canterbury Tales lately? If you had, you would soon notice that the Middle English needs more than a little effort to get into. If they haven’t already been translated, most editions gloss several words, which is to say they provide marginal notations of their meaning, and include lengthy contextual explanations for nearly every tale. Ancient and medieval texts remind us that the past is a world unto itself. It’s doubtful that we’ll ever be able to enter such a milieu completely.

But that’s where historical fiction comes in. While we might not know everything that there is to know about a certain time period, writing historical fiction allows us to create worlds which, at least, resemble our understanding of the past. And that’s the key: historical fiction tends to reveal more about what we have taken from times long gone. And a nice Elizabethan backdrop doesn’t hurt, either.

So why else do we tend to gravitate toward this expansive, yet familiar, genre?

 

Social Commentary

Sometimes, all we need is to look at someone else doing the same thing we’re doing in order to gain a deeper understanding of who we are. Framing narratives in history creates an illusion of distance from our current reality. This separation becomes a useful tool for authors. It gives them freer rein to create worlds that closely parallel our own; to get into the psyches of characters who resemble parts of ourselves, or our collective identity; and to comment on or critique actions, ideologies, and events that we struggle with as a society. When reading historical fiction, we aren’t focused on preserving our own egos. Time separates “us” from “them.” For the same reasons, authors of these works feel less pressure to hold back their opinions. They can get away with making striking statements, and in this context, we may be more inclined to agree with them.

 

Rose-Colored Glasses

We tend to romanticize the past as a simpler time. Feel free to replace “simpler” with a bevy of other positive adjectives: more beautiful, more alive, more exciting. Historical fiction sometimes becomes a means for us to escape from the harsh reality of the present. Bemoaning trending short shorts and crop tops, we might marvel at the beautiful fashion of the Victorian aristocracy. We might wish to partake in a revolutionary Salon of the Enlightenment, displaying a Voltairean wit which might not be as well received today. Or we might want to reside in Mesopotamia, that mystical land where everything began, where men and women looked to the skies to foretell the quality of their futures. When we look at a past era, we might think that we would have had more important or fulfilling lives had we lived in that time. Historical fiction responds to our pervasive discomfort with the present. While our fantasies may suffer the limitation of being only partially based in reality, the appreciation that historical fiction awakens within us keeps us coming back for more.

 

Social Media as a Benchmark

Historical fiction fills in a much-needed gap in our collective subconscious for a connection with our past. Sometimes we can find social media overbearing. We feel like we know more than we want to about people leading predictable lives inasmuch as they are usually quite similar to our own. But the details of the everyday lives of people past are relatively unknown to us. And judging from the countless novels written about famous past figures, or purporting to utilize their perspective, we wouldn’t mind reading a play-by-play of their daily activities. The same applies to particularly intriguing time periods. Think of the success of The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory or Ken Follett’s The Pillars of the Earth. We want to know how people used to live in order to gather clues about human nature, and the recurrent themes that unite people across time. Historical fiction provides the characters, the setting, and the conflict to help us bear witness to those themes.

 

Doing More with Less

The past still has barriers that the present has already solved. Consider that even a few decades ago, the internet wasn’t a tool for the masses. Only a hundred years before that point in time did the first gasoline-powered car come out.

How were peoples of the past able to overcome the same problems that plague humanity while working with what we might consider a deficit of knowledge and technology? They came to live, and even thrive, with “less” to work with than we have now. Historical fiction provides us with the stories of the struggles of individuals deeply embedded in the unique strengths and weaknesses of their times. Yet these individuals must still contend with eternal human concerns, striving much like we do today, to understand the purpose and meaning behind life. Historical fiction is unique in its ability to show us how people with capacities similar to our own coped with environments beyond our ability to fully comprehend.

 

 

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